tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post1744263691978165748..comments2023-07-17T03:45:44.878-07:00Comments on Room 4 St Joes: 100WC - Week #19 - ChloeMrs Horanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08649600165135422018noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-54368823960196176162020-02-11T15:02:36.733-08:002020-02-11T15:02:36.733-08:00Hi Chloe,
I really enjoyed the first couple sente...Hi Chloe, <br />I really enjoyed the first couple sentences of your story.<br />I just think that next time you need to add puncheon when someone is talking.<br />Continue enjoying writing.<br />From SamaraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com