tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post4415343765437573904..comments2023-07-17T03:45:44.878-07:00Comments on Room 4 St Joes: Aug 19 (6) - 100WC - Kerrin WilsonMrs Horanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08649600165135422018noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-46492667166700027362019-08-29T09:42:35.255-07:002019-08-29T09:42:35.255-07:00Hi Kerrin!
I enjoyed reading your story. It is a ...Hi Kerrin!<br /><br />I enjoyed reading your story. It is a very interesting use of the prompt, and I like how you set your story at a school during storytime too! I can see that you have learnt some really cool facts about alligators, which I really like as I am actually a biologist (cool coincidence right!). Heres another cool fact for you: did you know that alligators and crocodiles have stayed basically the same since the time of the dinosaurs! They were crawling and swimming about all those millions of years ago just like they are today. <br /><br />If i had to say one thing to improve, it would be to put some more full stops in your story. This would make it easier to read.<br /><br />Keep writing!<br /><br />Ana, Oxford UK, Team100Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com