tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post7110323542819849392..comments2023-07-17T03:45:44.878-07:00Comments on Room 4 St Joes: 100WC-Week#20 - AlexMrs Horanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08649600165135422018noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-24838996033002729992020-02-26T12:26:57.642-08:002020-02-26T12:26:57.642-08:00HI Alex good work the action twists and turns and ...HI Alex good work the action twists and turns and the part with the cat and it waddled out of the bush it was funny AddisonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-85081026208947702772020-02-19T09:42:34.366-08:002020-02-19T09:42:34.366-08:00So much is going on in your story Alex! There is ...So much is going on in your story Alex! There is suspense and action and very good use of surprise. I was worried when you and the cat disappeared, but relieved to hear it was only because you had fainted. I particularly liked your use of the word ‘waddled’ to describe the cat moving. I can just picture it!<br /><br />Janet Team100WCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com