tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post7174838716520540268..comments2023-07-17T03:45:44.878-07:00Comments on Room 4 St Joes: 100wc-week#19-AddisonMrs Horanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08649600165135422018noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-12885512765381999592020-02-24T12:59:33.488-08:002020-02-24T12:59:33.488-08:00Hi Addison,I like the part where you got a sandwic...Hi Addison,I like the part where you got a sandwich instead of an ice cream why did you kneel down into the water instead of standing?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-4044247662504046752020-02-24T12:53:10.804-08:002020-02-24T12:53:10.804-08:00Hi Addison I really liked the way you described th...Hi Addison I really liked the way you described the pain with onomatopoeia's <br />Have you really got stung by a jellyfish before?.<br />Keep up the good work, <br />-William<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-14019966701422787902020-02-11T14:59:07.044-08:002020-02-11T14:59:07.044-08:00Great story Addison I liked how you put ... at the...Great story Addison I liked how you put ... at the end and I wish I wen't to the beach with my friends from Carla. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-2580958800738811932020-02-11T14:56:34.081-08:002020-02-11T14:56:34.081-08:00 Hi Addison!, I really liked it because it was rea... Hi Addison!, I really liked it because it was really exiting. And especially when the jellyfish stung you!.<br />Next time think about adding full stops.<br />Awesome writing Addison!<br />From MilahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com