tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post778456722611488132..comments2023-07-17T03:45:44.878-07:00Comments on Room 4 St Joes: 100WC - Week #20 - PhoenixMrs Horanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08649600165135422018noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1275199318985015527.post-8992393174396868542020-02-24T12:50:33.947-08:002020-02-24T12:50:33.947-08:00Hi Phoenix
I really like your story. I like how mu...Hi Phoenix<br />I really like your story. I like how much color the bird has. Did you end up killing the bird?. I like the cliffhanger. Maybe next time think about adding more full stops.Overall a great story.<br />From Milah Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com