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Thursday, June 28, 2018
100wc week #37 Abbie
It had been raining all morning and it still had not stopped the paddocks were flooded with all the cows at the top.The cows were all huddled together in 1 big big mob with all the grass at the top turned into mud. The lambs and sheep were altogether in the shed as they shoved them selves in.Now there was thunder and lightning too. Loud roaring noises shook the ground and thick thick clouds that narley touched the ground.So I´m just glad I´m inside now.
By Abbie
By Abbie
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I like your writing it dint stop raning
ReplyDeleteits been really wet right I like your writing
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