Some hikers were walking through the forest and they came to a stop looking right through this panel they wondered if they could walk through so one of the guys tried to walk through it. But he never came out the other side they stand beside the door one down two to go. They waited and waited but he never returned they wondered if they should go but didn’t want to be alone in a different world. Will they go through the door.
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