Out of nowhere I thought of making some kind of art with nature and a Lego man, yes it’s weird but I had a great feeling that it would be beautiful. I started by getting an unused glass bottle and washed it. I dried it and that’s when I started decorating. I put a couple of small rocks into the glass. I got some glue out of my sisters shelve and glued the Lego man onto a rock. It looked better than I thought, but something was missing, nothing was living in it. I put some ladybirds in it. I loved it.
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