I heard music coming from upstairs, it was strange music. Definitely not what my little sister listened to, so I went upstairs, I wondered what was behind the door, so I opened the door and saw little gnomes. They were wheeling little wheelbarrows with some sort of strange food in it. Then when I looked up I saw a gnome with a crown playing a weird instrument. Then everything around me when black. I got tied up and kidnapped the wanted me to stay in this land for ever and ever. I heard my mum calling me from the other side of the door, I wanted to stay.
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteGreat story! What an imaginative interpretation of the prompt phrase. The gnomes tying up your character sounds like the Lilliputians tying up Gulliver in Gulliver's travels- I strongly recommend reading it. Keep up the good work.
Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK
I liked it because it was funny . I think you should make it 100 words not 104.
ReplyDeleteFrom Angelo