When it was 2:27 am the lights in my room were flickering. I got really scared so I just tried to go to sleep and guess what I did. The next morning i had eggs for the morning and they were good after that i had to get a haircut i had to get a fringe which i didn’t like after I got the haircut i was allowed to dye my hair black and then they washed it and then I went back home and watched tv. After i had a shower and then washed my face and brushed my teeth and went to bed.
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