“It’s a disaster” I screamed “everything's ruined” Oh I’m sorry didn’t see you there I’ll go back to the beginning for you. It was a Sunday morning and I was preparing for my piano recital I had wheeled my piano onto the stage and was grabbing my flute (for the finale) and grabbing my notes when CRASH I had dropped my flute and had completely destroyed it. So we went out and brought a new one everything was perfect and the recital went quickly soon it was time for my flute FLUBBER FLOP it was completely out of tune everything's ruined so I cried and cried.
your writing is really good but you don't have any full stops Brendan
ReplyDeletehi charlee it is really good but mabie next time put more full stops in
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