Lets go to the beach today OK what beach are we going to maybe i don't know you chose OK whangamata let's go now OK get in the car you do know you have to take a bag of clothes because are staying there the night ya ya can we stay at uncle big house sure because we are going to have a girls weekend but uncle big is a boy ya that doesn't matter we will have girl day in the day time and uncle big will be at work OK our day is finished lets have an other girls day soon
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