On planet zorgon we take yes for an answer and no for a punishment um excuse me said little sally what is that thing over there it looks like a lost guitar it is quite funny no sally it is an anchor it holds down our ship if we didn't have it our spaceship will float away so it is very important why don't we have an anchor said sally so our feet so we don't float away little sally said zorg gravity doesn't like us so we won't float away OK said sally thank you for taking me you are very welcome replied zorg
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