Now here is my special presentation for the magic show called out April why is that hat on the table tho asked Tommy because it is for my show now everybody close your eyes now the hat will disappear April quickly grabbed the hat and threw it out the door wow said Tommy it's gone everybody clapped well done April miss joy whisperer cheerfully well done now its Tommy turn what are you doing today I don't no said Tommy maybe a magic show i know the secret like April
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