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Sunday, August 4, 2019

100WC - Abby Sommerhalder The Ghosts.

The house creaked as I walked into the first room. There is an old TV crackling on the shelf. I open the draw and an old CD is in there. I take it out and put it into the DVD player. The TV flickers to life and a voice came out of the old box. An OoooohhhhhH sound is what I heard but then I realize there was no power. I heard them before I saw them. Suddenly a family of ghosts fly round me and I ran all the way home. I ́m in bed. It was just a dream.

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