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Thursday, August 8, 2019

Aug 19 (6) - 100WC - Brooke


“Bang, crack, meowww, creeeak.” I couldn’t go to sleep, all I could hear was the meowing of the cats and the creaks of the house. Suddenly a bang! cleared my mind, I had to find out what was going on, I slowly pulled back the covers grabbed a torch and tiptoed over to the back door. 
The garage was dark as I quietly turned the light on, I jumped scared until I realised that the big lump of fur was just my dog Dusty. I walked quietly outside, maybe it was just the lambs I thought to myself. Suddenly a noise startled me I heard them before I saw them the lambs were just playing around and bunting the shed, now that was what the noises were, I sighed. Suddenly footsteps made me look behind me, oh no, my mum was running toward me, now I was in big trouble…….


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