As I
sailed Quietly towards a
tropical island I heard a sound that sound like
cats.I Quickly sailed across the
turquoise water to find out what it was.There in mid air where flying animals.Who would do such a thing I thought to myself then I knew it was Dr Know-it-all!I saw the machine that made the animals fly and turned it off that was a bad move!Suddenly every animal in the sky started crashing down on me!There I saw it the majestic cat of gold it was guarded by a python I grabbed it then...
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