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Sunday, November 17, 2019

100 w-c week 11# lachlan w

It was the earthquake?! We all took cover under the desks it had in a sec stop… we all got up hearing our parents running through the doors like lions they grab both of us we got back home to hear the news that the marmite factory

Had been closed. for whole mouth!!!? Noooooooooo not the marmite then my brother told me that he jam better than marmite “no” he said “l like marmite” I said that to him it will that its going to take a long long time. But at lest we still have nutella right terry terry?...

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