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Sunday, November 17, 2019

100WC#11 MARMITE By Riley

“No,” he said, “I like Marmite.” His face was covered in it and stolen Marmite jars
were everywhere making it extremely hard to walk around in the kitchen.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh he screamed there’s no marmite left then he
jumped out the window going into houses and coming back out with Marmite jars
and attacking the marmite inside once he had finished the jar he threw it away. Over
the racked he was making you could now hear the wail of sirens as the police
surrounded him.

But then he turned to the constable he said “HI” I LIKE MARMITE goodbye dude.”

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