Unfortunate marmite events 100WC Week #11 Mitchell brown
There was darkness and then gooey substance like tar surrounded the country, it was vegemite as a factory was swallowed whole by vegemite, a Sanitarium marmite logo bubbled up then a Vegemite man said ̈only vegemite now ̈ as he retorted that sentence over and over the man wakes up. An earthquake Jolts and recoiled to the bouncing movements of tectonic plates clashing. He glances over to the Marmite factory it gone, at that exact time he feels a sharp push against his chest rebarb has pierced him, ¨No ̈ he said ̈ I like marmite. ̈
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