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Tuesday, February 4, 2020
100WC - Week #19 - Kenneth
I was rushing to the stores. Hoping to find a present fit for my parents. I searched and searched, but although it was Saturday nothing was open. I felt anxious inside. Knowing the consequences for what was going to happen. I searched around, and I saw an open shop. I decided to check for any presents that my parents would like. But when I looked in the shop, all I saw were expensive watches. I thought about stealing the watch and just leaving. But there were many other choices, that didn’t require me getting in trouble. So I bought it...
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I enjoyed reading this because of the way you described your feelings " I felt anxious inside." continue writing
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