There were so many gardners working at the park digging lots of holes preparing for new plants . I had to keep Bounce away from the workers as there was a sign saying “ KEEP DOGS AWAY”.I was worried Bounce was going to dig a hole and run away with a flower. Let’s go home Bounce.
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