We looked at the full moon tonight. the zombies are upgrading tonight. like mutating. we ran into a few bad zombies. and hard ones too. I found a letter. it sed go to your tonight bring everyone. and it had the date 2020.so we did. it so we went to the door and we talked hard talking inside . so we opened the door and there were 10 zombies inside my house!!!!. We went crazy. So the zombies sed its ok. So we stopped. When we looked up there where holes in the roof. So we whore sad we cried lode
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Sunday, April 26, 2020
100WC - Week #31 - Phoenix
We looked at the full moon tonight. the zombies are upgrading tonight. like mutating. we ran into a few bad zombies. and hard ones too. I found a letter. it sed go to your tonight bring everyone. and it had the date 2020.so we did. it so we went to the door and we talked hard talking inside . so we opened the door and there were 10 zombies inside my house!!!!. We went crazy. So the zombies sed its ok. So we stopped. When we looked up there where holes in the roof. So we whore sad we cried lode
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Hullo there Phoenix.
ReplyDeleteI think that you had some really good ideas for this prompt because the picture looks quite spooky and scary. Your story tells how it was scary inside as well as outside. Remember to do your very best proofreading when you write so that it is easy for your readers to know exactly what you are trying to tell them.
Ms M Team #100WC
keep it up Phoenix
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