I was working at Vowles transport in the school holidays. I saw this big truck just sitting there, I thought to myself ¨ but should I really do this¨. Yes I should, one spin around the block will be ok. When no one was looking, I ran and got the keys for the truck. I jumped in and pulled the seat up as close as I could to the steering wheel hoping I would be able to touch the pedals. I put my foot on the clutch and put it into first gear then slowly rolled out the gate hoping no one would see me. I changed into gear two and got my speed up but then there was an almighty BANG. I slammed the breaks on and saw people running towards me. My joy ride was over!
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