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Sunday, May 24, 2020
100wc - week 35 - Carla
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You have responded so well to this picture prompt, Carla. You have not missed anything! I particularly like the way you tell us what the season is and what makes the hill in the picture so beautiful. I also like the way you tell you reader what the dog is thinking about. It really beings the whole thing to life.
ReplyDeleteJanet Team 100WC