Night goes down the suns now taking over i was on the farm looking for the bull. That escaped its padic dad told me to wait there for me while he goes and opens a gate. I said “Sure” After a couple of minutes dad was driving back with a bull in front of his motorbike. then i saw ittrying to charge me! I tried getting under the fence but it was to low i would get a big SHOCK! So i starting running The other way towards home!
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