I was laying some CONCRETE down on our new house and the CONCRETE was so FLUFFY . When it dried I went on my red SCOOTER I was going around and around. Then bang It cracked it was not dry and I was already Danced in the CONCRETE so I was covered with CONCRETE. I need to go home and have a big nice shower to get all of the nasty Concrete off me. Now I left my nice red SCOOTER at the big pit of CONCRETE. Then my Dad said why are you so cover with so much CONCRETE
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