She started running towards me exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fist at me and came to a stop and asked, ``Why are you not scared of me? Hmm. hello she said then i said hey are you a ghost yeh she sed am i scary no i answered . Aww she sed i sed what's wrong she sed ghosts are meant to scare people oh ghosts don't scare me i send back to her. Do you want to be my friend i said she replied with an omg yes yes please oh my i have never had a friend before. Umm what is a friend? she sed i sed a friend is two people that like each other as friends.
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