…”but where did it go?” she shouted…
OH NO!!! Where did my ball go I think it rolled down the paddock and then I went down the paddock to go and find it. I was out there for 20min looking for it I couldn’t find it then she yelled WHERE DID IT GO then I went back to the house.
Mum said where did you go and I said I went down the paddock to go and find my ball. Then I said to mum can I go back to the shop in town and go and get a new ball please. Then Mum said ok let’s go to the shop then.
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