As I walked up the
pink stairs I started to get very
nervous, I ran down to see my gymnastics team waiting for me. The competition was starting I did all my routines perfectly, so after the big competition it was time for prize giving, I was pretty sure I heard my name get called but I just assumed it wasn't for me, then my teammates told me to go up, I had got 3rd overall, after the competition we had to go home. I saw the
river below on the way back, we got home and
cooked everyone dinner.
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