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Tuesday, August 6, 2019

Aug 19 (6) - 100WC - Kerrin Wilson

 Jimmy was in kindergarten his teacher wanted to read them a story. So everyone one came down to the mat and sit, and listen to her. The story is about alligators Jimmy is in Australia. Jimmy put his hand up And said I heard them before I saw them at the Australian zoo. ̈ ̈wow ̈ said the teacher.the teacher continued reading about alligators, ̈did you know that wild female alligators lay eggs in a hole and bury it¨ explain the teacher she turn to the next page ̈it says here how do you know the eggs are boy or girl if the temperature is cold then it a boy. And if the temperature is warm then is a girl the clock hits three o'clock the bell rings ̈HOME TIME¨ yelled the kids Jimmy gets his bag and saw dad waiting outside what did you ¨learned today¨ ask dad about alligators.

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