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Tuesday, August 6, 2019

Aug 19 (6) - 100WC - Abbie

Once upon a time there lived a princess and her name was Abbie. But one night she got stolen from a crazy lady who had a long nose,  her mom and dad were very sad. But she grew up to be a really good painter and every day she painted what she wanted to see. And every night she dreamed of what her real parents looked liked because she knew one day she would meet them. Then one day she met a handsome prince named gastone he made her realize that she can see a lot more than just what she painted. And he took her to see the lanterns on a boat. And when the crazy old lady got home  she wandered where they were and she set out hunting. for them for the whole night. She was very angry and she told her guards to go sees her. But she heard them before she saw them. Then at 2.00 in the morning they came back with her and she got put into jail. One night she saw her mum and dad and they saved her then they went far far away with her. And they all lived happily ever after.

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