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Tuesday, August 6, 2019

Aug 19 (6) - 100WC - Laine


I the weekend I was going to go to my friends house when I heard a noise it was a weird one as well. I was going through the bush when I heard it.It sounded like a group not just one person so I kept walking and I heard them before I saw them I was creeping me out. But finally I got there and then before I saw them they had my back and I screamed out for help. And my friends came out with a gun and shot them it was cool he said he had been waiting for that moment.

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