I was on a plane going to Australia as I was watching a movie the food had came as I turned my head, the world spun as I was getting my food I asked for water when I got my water the lady left as she left I drank all my water hours later we landed as I was hopping off the plane I felt really dizzy as I was walking into the airport I fell to the ground then everyone came to help.
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