When Hayley was first learning how to drive. All she had to do was drive down the driveway, out onto the road and drive to the petrol station. So she started the engine, and put the car into reverse which is silly because she could fly off the edge and straight into the neighbours roof. You see our house is on the edge of a retaining wall and if we reverse we will fly off the edge. The car became like a rocket in the air. Crash! Bang! Crunch! Now our car is a roofing tile on the neighbours house.
Hello,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added onomatopoeia.
And how you could just picture it like a rocket in the air.
Really descriptive story. Continue Writing.
- Kenneth