“Good morning mum”, I say as she walks by . “Good morning honey, what would you like for breakfast?” “Weetbix please”. As I was eating breakfast I was wondering what to do today . “Mum mum mum can I go horse riding please, pretty please?” , “Once u have finished breakfast” . CRASH!!! “MUUUUMM!!!” “Mum something just crashed through our roof!!! Call the police!!”
As mum grabbed the phone we both ran outside to see what had made the loud crash. I heard mum on the phone “You're not going to believe this but please send the police a car is in our roof”.
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