One Saturday afternoon a new tennis shop opened.
Yay! Scremend the whole town evan the animals in the Zoos apart from one animal the the leopard as you can tell the town loves tennis well not the leopard he hates tennis so that sunday he escaped out of his cage and broke into the tennis shop he grabbed a purple tennis racket and ran he is very fast.That next day the shopkeeper went to open his store when he realized that he had a brake in ahhhh! He screamed in fare i’ve been robbed help help please he called the cops they came straight away....
Yay! Scremend the whole town evan the animals in the Zoos apart from one animal the the leopard as you can tell the town loves tennis well not the leopard he hates tennis so that sunday he escaped out of his cage and broke into the tennis shop he grabbed a purple tennis racket and ran he is very fast.That next day the shopkeeper went to open his store when he realized that he had a brake in ahhhh! He screamed in fare i’ve been robbed help help please he called the cops they came straight away....
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