One day there was a tennis shop it was a really wired color cause it was purple like who make there shop purple whoo!! Itś is the odd one out on the whole street I walked into the shop it was so purple inside I said to the person behind the counter I said to him can I get a tennis racket he said yes shore so I grabbed the tennis racket and I went outside then I went to go play tennis and when I was playing tennis i sore a leopard it was creeping on to the tennis court
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