“Sandy we are going shopping” mum said
“NO I don't wanna go“ I said
“ I will buy what u you want“ mum said
Sandy rushed to the door without letting her mum see her
“come on mum we don't have all day” sandy said “ oh wow sandy that was quick” mum said “I want salt and vinegar chips” sandy said
“ok Hun¨ mum said
when they were there sandy rushed and they got all they
need and they went back home
sandy quickly opened the chips then
¨BLAH ¨this taste so sour why do they use vinegar on chips.
Monday, March 4, 2019
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nice one gracy
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