Monday, August 5, 2019

Aug 19 (6) - 100WC - Olivia

 I Slowly crept out of my room as I heard my parents trying to whisper. As I peeked an eye through the tiny cracks between the doors  I heard “ should we tell her that she's adopted  I heard them before I saw them that's just wrong!!! I ran to my room and locked the door ahhhh I'm adopted`  hopefully they didn't hear the big scream that I let out I don't want them to know that I know OMG I just can't believe this I'm actually ADOPTED  NOOO wait what it could be my sister or me ahhhhhhh
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