Here
you see a couple no ordinary couple the type that fights over everything
especially over hats yes hats.You see this couple loves fighting with each
other I don't know why so don't ask me anyway you see when they fight the woman
named Patrisha goes to her parents and the man named Johnny gets the whole
place to himself! Oh their fighting now wanna hear it ok well here it is.
¨Why was
the that hat on the table?¨Patrisha screamed.
¨Because
I put it on there¨Johnny shouted.
¨I'm
going to my parents house¨Patrisha shouted
¨that's
fine by me¨Johnny said happily.
The End Bye
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