¨Rowley time for your morning belly rub¨Mummy yelled
¨Ruf Ruf leave me alone¨I said thinking iḿ dying from the bright sunlight.
¨Now that is no way to treat your Mumma!¨My mum screamed
¨Hey leave the dog alone¨Dad said looking like he had been in his bedroom for years.
As I stood up I could hear Mum and Dad fighting.I went to the toilet to have a drink Because my water boll was empty.
¨Mmm Yum¨I said thinking I was in paradise
Then I realised who had just went toilet and didn't flush
¨W w what this can't be it looked just like a glass of water eww¨I barked.
Sunday, June 9, 2019
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This is great! I really enjoyed reading this, it is a very funny story and a creative way to take the prompt. I especially like the image of the dad looking as if he "had been in his bedroom for years".
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