Miss Oakes would always be so kind, she would always leave little notes behind.
She was only here for a little while, oh man I miss her beautiful clothing style.
Netball she played (she was a very good player)
Even when she lost, she was always smiling.
Looking back, I remember just how much we really need her,
She would be a really good teacher on her own, but sadly it is time for her to go
She might come back to our school even if she doesn't she'll still be in our hearts
We will miss you Miss Oakes.
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