The Clothes Argument.
“Why do we have to go.” I said.
“Because I said so” said Mum.
“But MUM I don’t want to go to the clothes shop” I whined
“Well to bad, we need to get you some warm clothes for the winter time.” she replied.
“Okay” I replied with a sad tone. “But can I at least get what I like.”
“Well that doesn’t mean I’m not going to give suggestions.” Mum replied.
“Fine but make sure the suggestions aren’t about ugly things like a blue,
red and white striped top.” I replied.
red and white striped top.” I replied.
“What could I suggest about then” said Mum.
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