I was in my bedroom
clumsily doing stuff, I danced a lot of stuff which were fortnite dances. I did
dance emote, t pose, hitchhiking, orange justice, running man and a whole lot
more. After I got bored and I played with my toys, I got this action figure
that was under my bed and played with that. He was a fighter that was from a
show that I like, and I also got a Darth Vader action figure as the villain.
Later my mum came in to tell me I had to go to the bath, so I did.
Thursday, October 18, 2018
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Hello Lucian, I really like this i had a good mental image, but if you put more sencerary details i could have a better mental image. Your friend, Aden
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