So, I was playing with my figurines and all I hear is this stupid bee buzzing around room so then when it comes near me I cant help but swat it. BANG!!I sigh in relief Because that was a near miss the bee almost hit my figurines. Then I realise this could be a perfect scene, I pretend my figurines are scientists studying the bee. I do this several days with different storyline but then on the fourth day I go to get the bee but it's turned a brown color and worst of all it stinks, A lot!!
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