“Man this bee is so big” “or are we just tiny” “nope the bee is bigger thin a baby rino” “we are tiny bob” “no the bee is big jack” “look lets just do our since and get on with work and look it is a bumble bee and “he is cute can we” “no we cant keep a bee it can i will sting me and you” “na you are so cool you let me keep the bear” that is because it was a toy” “no It was real” “ get on with your work” “ahh I got stan help”…
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