Hi I am called bumblebee so once in was flying very high then ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh puf!!!! Yep as you could guest I crashed into people taking photos of each other they got mad at me they started to take photo of me and I don't like photos but I didn't know at that time because I fainted,it was so bright and loud so one person still was taking photos and the other was looking at my foot. 3 hours later I woke up smelling huny and then it was gone so I flew back to my home and the end.
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