Running through the prayer garden, we see a bee lying there on the stone’s.
Me and Addison look down at the bee…
Bzz! Bzzz! Bzz!!
It tries to get up
BZZZZ!!
Bzz…
IT JUMPS UP AT US FLYING AFTER US!
WE RUN UP THE PATH OUR SHOES FULL OF STONES!
Addison trips on one of the steps,
We Scream!!
And we looked behind us to see if the bee was still following us and then BZZ!!!
It stings us both.
BzZzz!
It flies away,
We scream!
And still keep running! Then all of sudden a big swarm of bees come and then..
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