Rolling into the castle i felt the white wind blowing against my back the Leaves Crackling beneath my feet
I was in danger.
The guards were chasing me, i ran as fast as i could and ducked between a couple of buildings.
My Crafty self kicked in i started thinking.
I finally came up with a solution i would bait the guards into thinking i was trying to escape the castle then i would duck into the palace and disguise myself as one of them.
A simple but hard plan, I ran out and Started phase one...
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